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Finally cracked that weird plot hole after 3 months of staring at it

I was stuck on a scene where my main character had to get out of a locked room without magic or tools. I spent about 12 weeks rewriting it, trying keys, hidden doors, even a dumb guard leaving it open. None of it felt right for the story. Then last Tuesday I realized she could just pick the lock with a bobby pin she found in her pocket. That simple fix took me way too long to see. Has anyone else spent months on one detail only to find a super obvious solution?
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taylorlewis
Watched a friend rewrite a whole chapter because they forgot their character owned a crowbar.
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linda_wood
linda_wood23d ago
Oh, has your friend tried using a notes app on their phone for stuff like that? I keep a running list of weird items my characters pick up, because I've definitely had to go back and add a crowbar scene myself. It's a pain, but if you tag the item in your notes with the chapter number, you can check it fast. The trick is to write "crowbar in trunk" right when you add it, not three chapters later when you're proofreading. Saves you from rewriting a whole fight scene.
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