The notes I got from a retired writer about my old 'Space Precinct' fan script
I wrote a fan script for 'Space Precinct' back in the 90s after the show got cancelled and found an old forum where a retired TV writer read it. He told me I was using WAY too many technobabble terms that didn't mean anything, like 'quantum flux stabilizer' and 'hypercore matrix.' So I went back and cut out over 20 nonsense words, replacing them with actual dialogue about cops doing their jobs. Has anyone else tried rewriting an old show script with real writer feedback?